WRITE THE BEST BOOK YOU POSSIBLY CAN
This is for you if:
• you’re serious about writing a fantasy novel and want to do it well
• you work independently and want thoughtful, professional insight without live sessions
WHAT THIS LOOKS LIKE
Each month…
• you’ll receive detailed written feedback on one chapter (up to 5,000 words) of your fantasy manuscript.
• you receive feedback focused on story-level craft — structure, worldbuilding, character, pacing and clarity — that includes margin notes plus an editorial summary.
Additional pages, chapters, or live sessions are not included in this offer. For that type of support, check out my Novel Mentorship Programme!
GET MONTHLY MANUSCRIPT FEEDBACK FOR €699 PER MONTH
WHAT YOU WILL GAIN:
• A coherent draft
• Greater confidence in your story
• Professional feedback on your novel
FREQUENTLY ASKED QUESTIONS
How much material can I submit each month?
You may submit one chapter, up to 5,000 words, per month.
This limit allows me to give your work the level of attention and care it deserves, while keeping the process focused and contained.
What kind of feedback will I receive?
You’ll receive in-depth written feedback in the form of margin notes and an editorial summary.
Feedback focuses on:
• story structure and pacing
• worldbuilding and internal logic
• character development and consistency
• narrative clarity and cohesion
This is story-level feedback, not copyediting or proofreading.
Is this coaching or mentorship?
Neither. This is a written-only feedback service.
There are no live sessions and no ongoing coaching or accountability.
It’s designed for writers who prefer to work independently and want a professional outside perspective on their manuscript as they work.
Can I ask questions about the feedback?
Yes. Each month includes one short written check-in to clarify questions about the feedback you receive.
This is for clarification, not additional critique or coaching.
Can I submit more than one chapter or extra pages?
Not as part of this offer.
If you’d like feedback on additional material, this can be booked separately (subject to availability) at the standard per-page rate of €15.
Can we add a call or live session?
Live sessions are not included in this offer.
If you feel you would benefit from live discussion or ongoing coaching, I offer separate services that include that level of support.
What genres do you work with?
I specialise in contemporary and historical fantasy, including urban, gothic, steampunk, and related subgenres.
If you’re unsure whether your project fits, you’re always welcome to ask.
How long does feedback take?
Feedback is typically delivered within 10–14 days of submission, depending on my schedule.
Specific timelines will be confirmed once we begin working together.
Is there a minimum commitment?
Yes. This offer runs on a 3-month minimum commitment.
This allows time for meaningful engagement with your work and avoids a stop-start process.
Is this the right fit for me?
This offer works best if you:
• are serious about your novel
• are comfortable working independently
• value honest, thoughtful written feedback
• don’t need live coaching or accountability
If you’re unsure, I’m happy to help you think through which option fits your needs best.
Is there a way to submit less pages for a lower fee?
Yes, this is possible.
Submit a 1000 words per month: €199
Submit 2500 words per month: €499
Submit 3000 words per month: €599